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05/28/2010 (15 Comments)

15 thoughts on “05/28/2010 (15 Comments)

  1. Ahhh, yes! Those are fond memories indeed! From a storytelling standpoint, I really like this scene. It’s a great example of “showing” the reader not just “telling” the reader about Syrys and his childhood stick. It makes me relate better to Syrys when I start thinking about the simple things that entertained me as a child.

  2. I thought it was a walking stick.

    I think the “hanging off the cliff” scenario is only defined as fun because he had the stick and didn’t fall.

    Anybody want to bet if Syrys is gonna pass that stick onto Darius now?

  3. now thats a stick!

  4. REALLY nice pic of Syrys’ face! Also in the hanging off the cliff scene. 🙂

  5. Not just any stick… A multipurpose, extreme outdoors stick!

    Little Syrys playing is cute. ^_^

    Is that a big water Shivae he’s playing/fighting with? *not sure*

  6. I’ve got a few rock-climbing friends, and that cliff-pic just makes me scratch my head. Where is his rope?? Everyone knows you can’t go on adventures without the 50-feet rope!

  7. I have to say I adore this montage pic of Syrys’ youth. Interesting hair style, too, the chopped-flat topknot. Feels almost young Samurai-ish.

    As to the adult Syrys’ face, I adore it, too, as here he no longer looks tired and instead looks youthful still and a fair bit happy. It’s one of those looks I would yearn to see on his face more often, were I to be near him.

    Artistically and thematically, this montage is perhaps one of the best I’ve seen in a long long while. Thank you, Tiff, for being so kind as to share it with us.

    Yours,
    Mika Kyubi
    Kitsune-at-Large

  8. I’d love to see more on that spotty shadow Shivae! :3 maybe a bonus? And I have a stick just like that! I used it to know dead twigs out of a tree today! Later I’m taking it fishing. XD

    Me and Syry’s should go fishing and rock climbing!!

    Ciao!~

    1. It’s not actually a Shivae, it’s a big wing called a Starwing. 🙂 I’ve written them into the Shivae! scripts I’m working on, but might show them in Darius at some point, although I didn’t really plan on it. They’re a nocturnal pack hunter.

  9. Very nice!

  10. Well played… Very well played

    I wanna guess that Syrys won’t have to pass the stick on … Either there will be a package from Syrys that he doesn’t remember wrapping… Or Grandfather has found another uniquely clever gift.

  11. Every adventurer needs a sturdy stick.

  12. At least he enjoyed it, he put that stick to good use, very good use 🙂

  13. Mordak, Lord of Unholy Fury

    Ah yes, the joys a simple object can bring when your young…..

  14. bahahha 😀
    i look at the stick and wonder, what did syrys did when he was a kid?
    oh look, a ‘cliffhanger’ ahahha :p

    also is syrys = .. serious? is there anyway of pronunciation?
    ‘ y so syrys’ ?

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