11/13/2008 (5 Comments) (5 Comments)

Page 6 1) Cilke stating cynically: Everyone here looks nice until they get you alone in their labs. · Chatin: That’s not true, Cilke, Mekussa’s never hurt us… · Cilke: But she lets others hurt us. She doesn’t try to stop them, does she? That’s as bad as doing it herself. 2) Chatin frowning: … I’m going to go on to bed now. I’m sleepy. 3) Cisco: What about the scavies?? · Chatin: Mekussa said to keep the lights on until the whips hatch and they’ll leave us alone. 4) Group walking by mesh where Scavies are hiding. 5) Getting dressed for bed. 6) Sleeping

6 thoughts on “11/13/2008 (5 Comments) (5 Comments)

  1. Have their been script refinements since the original? Or am I just blacking out and forgetting whole sections of story again?

    Either way I really am enjoying this redo it seems easier to follow than the original was.

  2. Poor Chatin… so many things in her mind and she cannot tell them 🙁
    She seems so sad…

  3. Yes, there have been some script refinements since the original Akaelae #0.

    There’s extra dialogue here between Cilke’s initial statement and Chatin announcing that she’s going to bed.

  4. Ok I guess for once I remembered something right.

    In which case they are very nice little touches, they are adding a better sense of world I think.

  5. Very nice, bed is a good place to go ^^

  6. She’s quite on point with that ‘if she were nice she would at least try and stop others from hurting us.’

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