I’m looking at this and cringed at the extra panel that was unnecessary. Dialogue should have been on the panel before. I’m also cringing… because I have a massive job ahead of me to reverse outline all of the Cyantian Chronicles. I created their calendar and a timeline in my timeline software and haven’t moved any further than that. It’s a hugely intimidating process. I also have to go through and break down everything into proper stories with stopping points. Right now, I have NO idea where I am with anything, but I will figure it out one at a time. I need to get back to work on Akaelae. – Tiff